About Eden scene of my film. Pt1

Apple shapes, deleted scenes with Eva, and finally the title has appeared

First, about how things are going. I missed the post last week. Because I decided to finish the difficult parts of the film before August because of a potential order. Well, maybe the antidepressants also worked. Meanwhile, here is the finished 2-minute EDEN scene available for paid subscription.

The title

The film has a title now, and henceforth I will refer to it here as - From apples to egg. At first, it was in the original - there is such a Latin expression - ab ovo usque ad mala.

But our film is about emotions, which means we're doing a retrospective when we come to understand feelings. So it's from dessert to proteins.

In this shot, the Horse turns the "wrong" apple into an egg, which initially caused anxiety in the Neurotic, but now he will learn to live with it.

I decided to leave the fancy Latin, because normal people don't know Latin, and neither do I. And I promised myself to show off less, because if I present myself to others as the smartest, then I will continue to sit alone on the mountain of vanity cartoons are made for people, not for the players of the show What Where When.

An intellectual game show from the USSR that didn't survive the adaptation in the USA

By the way, did you notice Elio's flop compared to other understandable titles?

Apples

This is not my first cartoon where the apple of knowledge is the center of attention.

Before this, there was Virtuality Ontogenesis

The caterpillar crawls into an apple, which deceives it with an imitation of a home and family. The caterpillar becomes happy and these positive vibrations transform the apple into a machine for new interactions with reality.

Before this, there was this ugly picture of mine from the period of combining painting and 3D, which was even at an exhibition, I don’t understand how, it’s just awful.

Eve tries to hold back Peter the First (the discoverer), who was frightened by the birth of a creature interacting with half an apple and does not yet know that the other half is behind the door (that is, he could be content with what he has). This is later told in my Virtuality Ontogenesis.

In my cartoon, the plot is tied to 2 types of apples - the right one and the wrong one. Of course, the wrong one is mine, yours, ours. They, others, all of you - have good, normal apples.

Triibuline is trying to return the predisposition of the tree of knowledge. My tree consists of crown balls that once gently enveloped Triibuline (Adam), but gathered into a serpent/dragon/caterpillar.

What's with Eva?

First, let me show you the contents of the shortened script of the twice-shortened version of the film.

sc2. Expulsion from the Garden of Eden

Loc: Eden

In short: Eden's tree fragments, becoming the Serpent. Adam is abandoned, Eve is indifferent, and his attempt to offer a "square apple" fails. The Serpent embraces Eve, leaving Adam isolated.

Well, it turns out that for 5 minutes of the track, the Eden scene already takes up 2.5 minutes.

And I still need to intersperse it with a cut from Julia's collages. And this is only part of the story, and I want to keep it understandable.

Eva is the same Triibuline, Neurotic, Joker, only in a skirt - they all have the same face. That is, it is clear what I am getting at, right?

Eva makes the picture harsher and vulnerable, but I will leave her until I work on the full version. As I said, it will be a music video for the exhibition. And then I will make an 8-minute version at my own pace.

In reality, it either won't happen, or I'll also be busting my ass in a hurry.

Don't be shy, say what you think. For example, do you believe in the possibility of returning to making an extended version of a film after receiving festival laurels? Have you ever finished a piece of work that you've already shown to everyone?